Make sure your movie's done before you submit it
The only good thing I can say about this movie is that it least looks like you put some effort into it. Other than that, it doesn't have any real purpose--it's not very funny, it's not appealing, and the music loops on top of itself. Worst of all, you even included a preloader; usually this would be a good thing, but it clearly means that you know how to code and that you didn't even bother to pause the movie when it finishes. That's pure carelessness on your part.
Also, the style of your drawing is undeniably similar to that of Eddsworld, but I assume that was intentional, as your username is also quite similar to that of Edd's. Basing one's style on someone else's is almost always a bad thing to do, as it's very unoriginal and borderline plagiarism.
Overall, make sure your next projects are more polished. I know we all have to start somewhere, but people don't want to see amateur material like this. Make some improvements before submitting something else, and I'm sure you'll whip up something nice.